Grid

In my last post, I wrote that I was working on translating my novel plan into chapters. As someone who likes organisation, planning and spreadsheets I was intrigued by Emma Darwin’s post on using a grid to plan a novel. Please see the post at the following link. http://emmadarwin.typepad.com/thisitchofwriting/2010/05/help-yourself.html I don’t normally follow the different ways in which writers approach the technical side of writing; I believe you need to find your own way rather than become a Frankenstein of different methods. However, this grid fitted with the way that I work. I now have a grid of thirty chapters, setting out the characters, the detail of what happens, the theme and any relevant background. The beauty is that I can now see where there are areas that deaden the pace (although quieter chapters are needed to allow the reader to take a breath and reflect), where there are too many chapters focussed on one character etc. Today I had that lovely feeling of being able to make subtle links between events and characters due to the fact that I was able to see the novel in its entirety at one time.

Hovering

I couldn’t get to sleep the other night. I was thinking about how I am going to take the novel plan and translate that into a narrative. The plan, drafted for one of my MA modules, is written in the first person. As I lay there it was frustrating me that it felt very linear and constrained. I was only seeing the story through the eyes of the lead character. Then I started to view it as if I was hovering above it and all of a sudden the other characters came rushing forward, clamouring to be heard. The lead character is an unreliable narrator and this will come over more effectively if I can see her from the perspective of the characters that she interacts with. Yesterday I started to break the plan down into chapters and examine each character in turn. Instantly it feels more comprehensive and there is more material and depth. So, that is the question of point of view answered.

First Tutorial

I had my first tutorial this week. There is good news with regard to my MA dissertation but hopefully more of that in later posts. In terms of the PhD, one of my concerns was the ‘chicken and egg’ question with regard to research. I have a propensity to want to complete a piece of work almost as soon as I have begun it but that is not possible with something that is designed to take three years. My tutor made me feel better by telling me it was ok to go and just read for a few months before starting the novel. I am still going to make a start on it next week but I feel the pressure is off.
Although the novel is planned in terms of the story, I have not yet decided on the point of view. My initial feeling is that it should be first person and linear. But can I hold the reader’s interest? Again, my tutor took the pressure off and told me to simply play around with it, try different approaches until it feels right.
I do have a good feel for the tone that I want to create. Although it is an historical novel, I want it to feel contemporary. I want the focus to be on the characters and not too much historical detail. The aim of a good historical novel is to help the reader explore contemporary issues that are perhaps still too raw or that have not yet had a line drawn under them; an ongoing social discourse. I have read Frederick Manning Her Privates We (1929) and Rose Macaulay Non-Combatants and Others (1916) this week and am struck by just how contemporary they feel.

New Start

Today is my first day of studying. When my other half left for work this morning I felt guilty at being off work. When you do a taught degree it becomes real from the first lecture and the fact there is a term deadline. I am now in the wonderful but frankly scary position that I am in complete control of what I do and when, there are are no specific deadlines and no regular lectures where I can share thoughts and concerns with others. What I have got is a timeline on Excel and a tutorial on Monday. I spent today reading the first of many novels on the list and marking relevant pages ready for inputting into my research framework. I am not even touching the novel until next week. The good thing is it's already planned and that plan has been graded as part of my MA. You will have noticed that I have already started blogging as a distraction...Right, back to the study!

Distinction and New Beginnings

It's official, I have passed my MA with distinction. Spurred on by this, I have cleared out the box room (or rather got my other half to put his piles of paper and God knows what else in the loft) and transformed it into a study. I'm going to be working part-time from 1 Jan and don't want to associate the living room with study and all the stress that goes with it; better to keep it to a small room at the top of the stairs so I can shut the door on it. I have updated my bibliography, designed a research framework and study timeline. It's all ready, I just have to open the first book, start taking notes and of course, commence the next novel. Happy New Year to all and I'll keep you posted on how things are going.

Hurrah! Good News!

I haven't updated this blog for a long time as I have been off travelling in New Zealand and Japan. I had a fantastic time and even managed to pick up a few early editions of novels that are on my PhD reading list. I got home to find 'the envelope' with my dissertation mark and feedback. I am absolutely thrilled - all A's and an A*. The feedback is very constructive and I will revisit the manuscript when I have finished the PhD. I feel much more confident about my writing now and am really looking forward to starting my studies again.

Charing Cross Rd

I spent a few happy hours this week wandering round the Charing Cross Rd looking for books that are on my ever increasing bibliography. In this time of the rise of the e-book, e-reader etc it was an absolute joy to immerse myself in the physicality of the paper book. Even the smell of second hand books makes me smile to myself. I've also been to another Fire Station Bookswap this week. I managed to offload Mothers Milk (did not enjoy it) for Poppy Shakespeare by Clare Allan which has been on my wish list for a while.